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Creative Critical Reflection

Gone Dark - Film Introduction

Screenplay

Gone Dark

By

Mark Tucker, Karli Johntry, Brent Buckles

Date: February 13, 2024




Mark Tucker, ,Karli Johntry Brent Buckles

tuckerm2@my.putnamschools.org

johntryk@my.putnamschools.org

bucklesb@my.putnamschools.org

901 State Rte 100, Florahome, FL 32140

 (386) 659-1737



Girl Stretching on a paved pathway

CHARACTER 1(Karli Johntry)


         *No Dialogue* 


Opening, Running Trails in the forest

              *Close up shot of Character 1 putting in headphones then pressing play on music*

Hold On, We're Going Home plays by Drake


 


EXT.  Trails,(park)- Mid day,cloudy

CHARACTER 1 

She starts running down the path.

CHARACTER 1

Makes her way down a staircase that leads to a darker more secluded trail. 

    CHARACTER 1

Continues running down the pavement

Character 2 (The watcher)?

(Breathing Heavily)

*Camera ShotThrough the lenses of their eyes watching the girl.*



*Many shots of the girl running and being watched later*




CHARACTER 2

  • Runs up behind the girl while shes taking a rest break, Knocks the girl out and picks her up and carries her away*

Cut to: Parking Lot, shown carrying body to white car. 


CHARACTER 2 

Puts girl in white car trunk


*Car Drives off*(scene ends)


Killing Eve

In class we watch the opening to an episode of “Killing Eve” in order to pull information from the camera shots and mise-en-scene. The opening scene takes place in an ice cream parlor somewhere in Vienna, with somewhat off putting music playing in the background. The camera mainly focuses on 2 people with the exception of the ice cream scooper. A majority of the shots are exchanged between a little girl and Villanelle that gradually grow closer building tension between the two, and ultimately ends with Villanelle knocking the little girl's ice cream into her lap. For the mise-en-scene, the ice cream parlor gives off a kind of vintage/nostalgic feel with the dim lights, plaid tablecloths, and neon colors. After finishing the clip, we tried to figure out what kind of personality traits the character Villanelle might have, coming to the conclusion that she’s  probably a sociopath, apathetic, and just kind of crazy in general. 

Mise-en-scene

Mise-en-scene:

Mise-en-Scene is a French term that means ‘to put in the scene’. Everything that the audience can see on screen is part of the mise-en-scene. Mise-en-scene can be broken down into costume, location, setting, scenery, props, lighting, actors, and framing.

Recently we’ve been tasked with writing about a couple films, as well as several still shots from these films to further educate ourselves on mise-en-scene. The first film that I have decided to write about is “Indiana Jones: Raiders of the Lost Ark”.

These shots of the film “Indiana Jones: Raiders of the Lost Ark” showcase one of the most iconic scenes in this movie, where Indiana Jones triggers a trap when he takes the Golden Idol and has to escape from this giant rolling boulder. 

One of the main leading factors of these shots are the props and setting. These things allow for viewers to kind of determine the age, as well as the value of certain objects in the scene. For example, we are able to see that the Golden Idol is a valuable artifact solely because it is gold (and also since it has the word “Golden” in its name), we are also able to tell that these ruins that Dr. Jones is exploring are very old due to the overgrown/earthy look that has been applied to it like dirt, moss, and vines.

In this last shot, you can easily tell that it takes place in a jungle. You can determine that it’s a jungle with the murky waters, the overgrown grass in the background, and the hills that are almost hidden by the greenery.

My next film of choice is “La La Land”. This drama/comedy movie uses lights and colors as its main source of emotion. These colors are usually used to help convey or make the viewer feel a certain emotion when watching the scene. In this first still shot, we can see that Mia is wearing a yellow dress which highly contrasts from the surrounding purplish light. It may not have any actual meaning to the story or in the movie, but yellow and purple are supposedly complete opposites of each other when it comes to colors, so I just thought that it was a cool little detail.

In this next scene the lighting is obviously very focused on Sebastian. Sebastian is given the spotlight because at this moment he is doing what he loves, and what is important to him. The same song that he is playing in this moment is also repeated throughout the film many different times, and is supposed to represent Mias and Sebastians relationship at certain points

Storyboard & Initial Ideas

After about a week of planning and writing, Mr. Bergen showed the class some shots from multiple movies on Youtube, our team finally decided on the kinds of shots and angles we would like to use while filming our video. Just to really get inspiration for our shots we also decided to watch movie opening and shots of the same genre that we wanted to film on.

For the first shot that I decided sketch out, and though it may not be a thriller/mystery movie, I took inspiration from the compartment shot in "Pulp Fiction". I thought that it had a nice angle and I wanted to utilize it in our filming. I could use a shot like this if the character is grabbing and object out of the trunk, or putting something in.

Another shot that I wanted to utilize is one that was used in "Shutter Island", it has a shot of a white screen which was fog, and has a ship emerge out of it. I wanted to use this with a black screen/ really dark lighting and light emitting from the headlights on a car.

For my last shot that I had sketched, I used an overhead shot of a road cutting through a forest. This road is going to feature the same car from the previous shot, and will most likely take place around the same time as it too.

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Genre Research: Mystery Thriller

Glass Onion: A Knives Out Mystery

"Glass Onion: A Knives Out Mystery" (2022) is a mystery/crime film that mainly takes place on a billionaires private Greek island. The movie begins with the name of the film company, and the goes to a black screen.

The black screen is accompanied by a knock on the door and then cuts to the actual opening of the movie which is actually very similar to the opening of the first "Home Alone", having a mother answer the who also has a somewhat chaotic household.

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After opening the door the mother quickly signs a paper and grabs a mysterious box from the mailman and sits it down in the kitchen, hastily preparing for her news interview taking place in her house. We find out after the interview that each of the womans friends have also received the same kind of box leading to question. The beginning of this movie doesn't really have any indications that this is a mystery movie besides the box given to each person, as well as any person who has seen a "Knives' Out" film before.

Shutter Island

"Shutter Island" (2010) is a thriller/mystery film that takes place in 1954. After showing the film company, the opening fades to a black screen which has text saying the date and location. "1954. Boston Harbor Islands".

The black then fades into a light gray with the sound of waves and a deep foghorn like undertone playing in the background. Out of that light gray screen we see a ship appear out of it, finding out that it wasn't a single colored screen but was actually fog.

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After seeing the ship come out of the fog, the film cuts to a nicely dressed man feeling what we could only assume as sea sick, almost throwing up. Then walking out to the deck of the ship to meet with someone. The beginning of this film immediately has an eerie kind of feel to it whenever you hear and see the ship come out of the fog, and you can tell that this is some sort of mystery thriller movie.

Film Score Final Project

In our mini-film me and partner (Josilyn) decided to scrap our original idea of having a mysterious book fall off the shelf and have the character go to investigate since it seemed to be a common idea among a few other groups in the class, so instead we decided to go with the main character of our mini-film sitting down on a bean bag and then searching through it because it felt kind of funny/off after sitting down on it. I filmed the entire process and Josilyn was the actor in it, and we both helped edit the video. It was kind of hard trying to convey the feelings that the music was supposed to give off since we didn't have a lot of time given that we restarted, and that the video may have seemed a little confusing/unconvincing. I know our film definitely wasn't the best out of our class, but I feel as though it was okay. We tried with the time we had.

The peer-reviews helped us realize that we definitely needed better acting and ideas. We'll probably just stick with our original idea next time even if it's not that unique.

Sound Scores

This past week, we transitioned from looking at representation in film and television and began researching how film scores impact a scene. We were tasked with creating a 45-75 second sequence where we could apply two different scores to change the impact on our audience.

For our sequence we have our character be walking through a library when a book falls off the shelf, and open onto the floor. The character then goes and looks at the book, and that is when our scene is supposed to end.

In our first shot we will be focusing mainly on our character. Our character will be walking through the library looking for a book to read, running out of luck and time, a book will suddenly fall off the shelf leaving our character to investigate.

In our next shot our character will be standing over the booking looking at it. We will have 2 different angles for the shots being used in this scene. One will be over the shoulder facing down towards the book, and the other will be floor level facing up from the perspective of the book.

Our last shot is going to have the character focusing on the book, looking at its contents as 2 different genres of music play in the background. The type of music will most likely be a kind of mysterious and magical sound, and the other will be a more ominous and sinister one.

Are Hallmark Movies Offensive?

Throughout the month we’ve been trying to watch different clips and episodes from shows and movies but haven’t really been able to due to the restrictions that the school district has set for us. Mr. Bergen ended up having to email Mr. Theobold multiple times and after about a week of going back and forth over email, we just decided that we would instead watch a Hallmark movie on DVD since DVD’s were the only things that we were allowed to use.

When a workaholic business woman named Holly Crosby is forced to take off work on Christmas to go take care of her injured father who loves her and is very excited to have her come visit. Holly only plans on staying for a few days before she goes back to work, but eventually she finds out that her father is in need of significant financial help for Santaville and is forced to stay a little longer than expected. In search of financial aid, she meets a guy named Ben while going to meet up with one of her old friends. During this process we are reintroduced to a character named Peter who had actually met Holly a long time ago and was shown at the beginning of the movie during a flashback.

Ben reveals to Holly that he may be able to help her and her father and offers them a contract in which they sign. Holly eventually goes on a “date” with Ben to discuss their options for Santaville where he then goes outside to take a call. Holly follows him outside and ovehears that he was planning on scamming her father out of Santaville, Holly is furious but doesn’t confront him about it with her walking off afterwards.

The gang finds a solution to recover Santville by selling Peters nutcrackers, in doing so they come just short of the $50,000 that they need. This is when Holly’s boss calls and offers to buy all of Peter's nutcrackers for his toy company. They then buy back Santaville and Holly decides to stay and live there with Peter and her father as the head of sales for the nutcrackers, and that’s basically how it all ends.

Is the formula that is used in these movies offensive?

Well some of the drawbacks that may come with this formula are that it may not have enough representation for certain groups of people, but some might think that that’s actually a good thing since the movies aren’t trying to be “woke”, and are just meant to be enjoyable.

You shouldn’t really expect much from movies that are just supposed to be fun and loveable. They aren’t meant to change the world, they’re just meant to make people happy.

The movie may not have much representation for many groups, but it’s in no way offensive. It’s just meant to be a fun little story for everyone to enjoy.

I don’t think there should be anything changed about this formula, and that it should stay the same, even if they’re corny.

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Representation

Music Video Reflection

Last week in our Media Studies class, me and Josilyn (my partner) finished up our music video and submitted it to our blogs. On Thursday, we watched all of the other music videos that were made, in class.

Our planning and brainstorming process really only consisted of us trying to find out what we wanted to do for our project. Once we decided that we wanted to do the dancing scene from Pulp Fiction, it wasn’t too hard to try and recreate the moves. It took a few attempts to try and get each shot to look right, and even when we were finished filming, there were still a couple scenes where it didn’t look quite right.

For our filming location we tried to find a place that resembled the setting in the actual scene the most. Since there weren’t really any stages that were indoors available to us, we went and used one which was outside. We got help filming from Karli Johntry. While we danced she took the same kind of shots that were used in the real scene.

In order to edit our music video we just used CapCut. It wasn’t very complicated to use and we got the editing done within about 30 minutes. For the credits of our video, I downloaded the same font that was used in the movie title, to try and add to the resemblance of it.

Overall, I think we did a good job of reenacting the original video. Everything came together pretty well, even though there were a few problems with the floor we were dancing on. I ended up with holes in my socks from twisting on the concrete. But other than that everything went fine.

Many other videos that were made also had some interesting techniques that were used in them, even if they weren’t intentional. For example, in William Hudspeth and Kaleb Akins music video, there is a scene where you see the shadows on the wall appear before the characters do. This helps add a sort of dramatic effect to the shot. There’s also another music video where there is a reflection shown in a window. I don’t really know how to describe what happened but it was cool.

Music Video

Our chosen song is You Never Can Tell by Chuck Berry

Our reasoning for choosing this song is because we want to recreate the scene in Pulp Fiction of Mia Wallace(Uma Thurman) and Vincent Vega(John Travolta) dancing.

Our chosen genre is rock/blues. Some attributes of this genre are the instrumental sound and upbeat rhythm of the song

For our color palette we are going to do warm to cool tones to contrast with one another.

Shots that we will be using are full shots, mid shots and a few close up shots.

Storyboard

Forrest Gump

In the film's opening scene, the camera follows a feather throughout a city which eventually lands at Forrest’s feet whilst he is sitting on a bench. After the feather lands, Forrest picks up the feather and places it in his book. This feather may be used to represent a new cycle of life. Later on in the movie, the same feather falls out of the book emphasizing a new start, this new start being for little Forrest.

In the scene where Forrest’s mom is dying she talks about her destiny, and how she was destined to be Forrest’s mother. This scene turns out to be one of the biggest conversations about destiny and taking control of it. When Forrest asks his mother what his destiny is, she can’t really tell him the answer to the question and just tells him that he would have to find that out for himself. Later on in the movie, after Jenny’s death, Forrest once again wonders what his destiny is, eventually coming to a conclusion that they all may just be floating around randomly.

The theme was introduced in the opening scene, with the feather. The feather is a representation of how fate or destiny works. The feather is aimlessly floating around until it ends up at forests’ feet, representing that we don’t necessarily have control of our fate or destiny. The feather is the blueprint for the whole movie foreshadowing how destiny will occur throughout the movie. The feather adds a full circle effect from the beginning of the movie when the feather floats down to forest feet to the end of the movie when Forest sends his son off on the bus. 

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Top Gun: Maverick

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How do directors define genre in the first few minutes of a film? This week in Media Studies, we set out to answer that very question by viewing the opening scenes of Top Gun: Maverick (2022) and Forrest Gump (1994). We viewed each of these film openings several times and through several lenses to understand how genre was conveyed. For each viewing, we focused on camera work, editing,sound and mise-en-scene.

Our exploration into genre began with Top Gun: Maverick (2022). 

Top Gun: Maverick (2022) defines the movie's genre in the opening credits by using a masculine looking font for the title. Most of the shots have an intense and dramatic overtone while the crew on the aircraft carrier are preparing the jets. The opening scene is given its feel of action by the use of the song “Danger Zone” by Kenny Loggins about halfway through the scene. Many of the shots that are shown in the movie are filmed in ⅓ ‘s and don’t really have a main focus of character; as the scene continues the shots get shown progressively faster. These shots are also aided by the scene taking place at dawn, which gives it a beautiful and dramatic look.

The movie Forrest Gump (1994) is mainly filmed using thirds, especially when the main focus of the scene is Forrest himself. Each shot that was filmed in thirds was smooth and continuous. In the opening scene while the feather is falling, there is a slow and subtle piano track playing in the background. As the feather gets closer to the ground the real sounds of the city start to set in. The music in this scene ends as soon as the shot does.

Pride and Prejudice

The movie “Pride and Prejudice” takes place in the early 1800’s, and opens in a bright kind of messy environment with lots of greenery. This cements a warm and happy atmosphere with not only this one scene but also the rest of the movie, despite the multiple ups and downs that are to come. This feeling is also amplified by the piano that is slowly introduced in the background, which gives off a calm feeling.

In the opening scene of the movie, the director keeps the camera in one place focused on the environment while the sun slowly rises behind the trees. Once the camera is full of light from the sun, the title of the movie appears and after a few seconds it transitions and focuses on the main character “Lizzie”. With piano being slowly introduced in the background, Lizzie is shown walking while reading a book, after walking for a few seconds Lizzie closes the book, patting it, and arrives at a bridge bringing us into a new scene.

The main character Lizzie is shown crossing a small bridge with people and animals in the background along with ducks scurrying off the bridge into the water as she passes. This small segment of the opening is filmed using a wide shot. The camera then follows her to what looks to be a manor, on which passing by the door, Lizzie walks out of view of the camera leaving the viewers with an inside view of the manor. While slowly being drawn into the manor, we can see multiple women running around the house, as well as one playing piano. This leaves the audience with the realization that the music in the opening was actually diegetic. After the camera has been focused on the woman playing piano, it then turns to the right where we then see Lizzie, who looks into one of the windows of the manor and then enters the house smiling.

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